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:bulletblack:                          when the snow set in by alfred-georg                          :bulletblack:



. SnowFog .


. it cycles and begins again   there are differences   each time we had been together .
. the memory of    where    and when    is disturbingly unclear    occasioning unease .
. there had been warm and subtle moving light in yellows reds orange   warm heat .
. we had been close together   the scent of her still   present liquid   upon my     lips .

. it is the beginning   that memory of heat   it begins again    I am naked  unadorned .
. no gold hooped lobule and helix   nipples   erect   pointed in clench   still  ringless  .
. there are no muted by bright white   this current place   swarmed blue butterflies .
. this place is a glow of white grey blues   black   this place has no warmth   no heat .
. colors here are supposition   a hoped for longing    longing   now is this place I hold .

. it continues   a repeat   with difference   each occasion   thousands now   cold home .
. I seek   my source of wonder   she is out there   somewhere around   buried shape .
. lost loving girl .

. it is day or night   indiscernible  she will not last  I hurry on   voiceless  hard winds .
. shrieks torn heart break   throat raw silenced   footsteps slow   blood flag passage .
. no hope in this repeating blur landscape   feel myself lifeless as well   in separation .
. sprays of black   my valued shade of crimson life cast mute in abandon kick snows .

. it cycles in this manner with each repetition   she left   she left behind   what longs .
. it repeats with differences in the shape of the snow   the humps of drifts   the wind .
. it curves   wrapping   heartfelt  yet heartless  my blood is black   footprint markers .
. it shapes   clean white sheet   fogged  unmarked as yet  fresh  driven  unsatisfied .

. she rose   clothed   bundled    departed   singular   stonily wandered   into   storm .
. woken  I search   knowing   always that knowledge  that burden of presence I am .
. stripped   exposed   seen   a shadow now   in drifts of Kelvin white grey blue black .

. frozen .

. it begins again .


© Amanda 2011, 2012, 2013
Image: "when the snow set in" by :iconalfred-georg:


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  • Mood: Hopeless
  • Listening to: the same thing you are at this very moment
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:iconskulkey:
skulkey Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
your song reaches these aged ears, vibrates in unison in this cold heart, brings a tear to the eye which quickly freezes. you sing the dream so well...
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stung1010koth Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Professional Photographer
:tighthug:
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n3gativityinblack Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely :3
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:iconalfred-georg:
alfred-georg Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013   Photographer
love this text
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:iconamanda-graham:
Amanda-Graham Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Professional Writer
Merci Alfred, j'adore vos images et votre vision
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Alittlebitdreamer Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
I read yours words ;) Those are mine now :)
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:iconamanda-graham:
Amanda-Graham Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Professional Writer
si votre sens est "ils sont dans mon coeur" ... puis mes bras vous sont ouverts ...

pardonnez-moi
(franglais.merde)
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:iconalittlebitdreamer:
Alittlebitdreamer Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
:) le sens est:" je vous serre by the side of my heart, et par le pouvoir de vos mots qui sont devenus les miens."
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:iconamanda-graham:
Amanda-Graham Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Professional Writer
ah then Merci cherie
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:iconalittlebitdreamer:
Alittlebitdreamer Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
:rose:
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